Professions
Instructions:
Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.
Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6
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Main secretary hoon. Woh police adhikari hai. Ye aadmi dakiya hai. Ye aurat shikshika hai. Ye ladki chaatra hai. Ye ladke chaatra nahin hai, woh mechanic hai. Ye auraten manager hain. Woh bus driver hai. Ye aadmi mote khasama hai. Ye aurat patli aur ameer doctor hai. Woh paricharikiyan hain.
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Very nice job! You write better Hindi than most people in India can :)
Some comments:
+ Words like 'shikshika', 'adhikari' etc. are difficult Hindi words, and are on the fringes of becoming archaic. Their place has been taken by their English counterparts - 'teacher', 'officer' etc.. Not only that the urban India speaks a weird mix of Hindi with English, but even in rural areas of northern India (which is the heartland of Hindi) you will hardly find a soul using words line 'shikshika', 'adhikari'. This should however not deter you in learning the language in its purest form :)
+'Ye ladke chaatra nahin hai' -- ladke is plural therefore the auxilary verb should be plural 'hain' and not singular 'hai'. Also I think the noun associates with 'ladke' should be masculine ('chaatr') and not feminine ('chaatra')
Cheers!