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Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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लड़की के पास पच्चीस फूल और सात मोमबत्तियाँ हैं। उसके पास सोलह किताबें और दो साईकिलें हैं। लड़के के पास दस गाड़ियाँ और तेरह क़लमे हैं। उसके पास ग्यारह सिक्के और एक बटुआ हैं। औरत के पास तीन स्वेटर और चौदह जूते हैं। उसके पास इकतीस तैलिए और पाँचा चाबियाँ हैं। मेरे तीन भाई और छः बहनें हैं। मेरे एक लड़का और दो लड़कियाँ हैं। प्रकश का नौ कुत्ते और तीस चिड़ियाँ हैं। उसके पास आठ जीन्स और बीस कमीज़ हैं।
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  • Rohan
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    superb

    only technical snags thats nothing

    like wer u said mere teen bache hai ek ladka aur do larkiyaan

    its cool keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep

    the good work

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  • yogindra
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    ektis taulie aur paanch chabiyan...

    mera ek ladka aur..   prakaash ke paas nau...

    yogindra

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  • Harish
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    Its definitely very good work and you have done alot hard work on this excercise.

    ...just few IGNORABLE mistakes like;

    1) Uske paas....aur PAANCHA PAANCH chabi

    2)- Mere Mera ek ladka aur..

    3)Prakash ka ke paas nau kutte aur...

    Wish yoU GOOD LUCK :-)

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  • abbhi
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    बहुत अचछा

    पाँचा -पाँच, का-के

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  • Sutaria
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    Achha try hain

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