Going on Vacation
Instructions:
Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?
Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1
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अक्तुबर में, मेरी परिवार तुर्कि में उड़ेंगे। हम दुसरा होटल में आ रहे हैं। हम बीच जा रहे हैं। बच्चे बीच पर केल रहे हैं। शायद हम किताब पढ़ेंगे और हम सिनेमा में जा रहे हैं। हम बस चला रहे हैं और शाहर मिलेंगे। सोलहवां हम घर पर जा रहे हैं।
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i cant understand last two sentence. but you worked hard.keep it up
you have to work hard on spelling or grammar
october main, mein aur mera parivar turki ke liye udenge. ham dusri hotel mein... ham beach par jaa rahe...khel rahe hain...ham bus par jaa rahe...shahar mein milenge...solahvi ko ham ghar...
yogindra
atempt at the language is great
let me start with this
october mein mera parivar Turkey ja raha hai
hum dusre hotel mein therenge, hum beach ja rahe hai , bachche beach par khel rahe hai
now here is the trick when u say shayad hum kitab padhenge you cannot have aur as it means and you should use ya hum cinema jayenge
its milega humara ghar sholva hai
अक्टूबर, तुर्की, दूसरा, बीच पर जा, खेल, सिनेमा देखने जा, शाहर में,मिलेंगे सोलहवां
@ ashishkarya, awinash.ranjan, sarika shukla
your comments do not help me - please collect your points somewhere else - please let these senseless valuation - thanks.
all statements tell about future .1. October mein, main aur mera (parivar is masculine) parivar turki jayenge (we dont use flying).2. hum hotel mein jake rahenge (if you mean you will stay in hotel).3.hum beech par jayenge. (ja rahe hain is like gerade, but here we talk about future).4. next line will not hold good because you dont know if you will see children playing on beech.5. Shayad hum kitab padenge aur cinema jayenge.6.hum bus mein ghumenge aur shehar dekhenge .7.solahan tarikh (date) ko hum wapis aayenge.If you have noticed every verb ended with “ge” . aayenge,jayenge,dekhenge ,ghumenge,rahengeSo we use all the verb end with ge …funny like in german but in the beginning telling past.Geschriben,gegangen,gescucht,gefragt. I hope it becomes clear to you.or ask me
You need bit more practice....
Nice