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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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For tourist I recomend the mall shops, nigth clubs, sport clubs, Monserrate (a mountain with stairs for give on top, there have a church and a viewpoint , also can you find many tipical dishes and crafts)
Bogotá have many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, librarys,
and a bunch of people with open arms,
we are waiting for you,
Welcome to Colombia
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  • tropicallove
    Mochapoints: 359  |  Teacher Score: 122 (0%)

    For tourist I recommend the mall shops, night clubs, sport clubs, and  Monserrate (a mountain with stairs reaching to the top. On top of the mountain there is a church and you can have a bird’s eye view there. You can also find many typical dishes and crafts) .Bogotá has many huge parks and sport places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, libraries, and a bunch of people with open arms. We are waiting for you, Welcome to Colombia

     

    i hope i don't miss anything out .good job!!

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  • Dave
    Mochapoints: 18683  |  Teacher Score: 16995 (0%)

    Some corrections and suggestions:

    For tourists I recommend the mall shops, nigth night clubs, sport clubs and Monserrate (a mountain with stairs for give on to the mountain top, there have a church and a viewpoint. also can You can find many tipical typical dishes and crafts). Bogotá have has many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, librarys libraries, and a bunch groups of people with open arms. We are waiting for you. Welcome to Colombia.

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  • con o sin tí / ...
    Mochapoints: 2717  |  Teacher Score: 843 (0%)

    For tourist, I recomend the mall shops, night clubs, sport clubs. Monserrate (a mountain with stairs to go  on top, there is a church and a viewpoint , also you can find many tipical dishes and crafts) Bogotá has many huge parks and sport is places, mechanical parks, one water park, hotels, museums, libraries, and a bunch of people with open arms, we are waiting for you. Welcome to Colombia

     

    Good Attempt

    Cheers

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