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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 5

What are you wearing?

Instructions: Describe what you are wearing.

demi's submission: Average Rating:
It is 21:30 at night, i was learning english. 30 minutes after is the 22:00pm. I am prepared to end a learning courses. Two hours before the 19:00pm, I was with colleagues outside with dinner.

Thank you, teachers! I wish you have a good eveyday!

demi
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    Mochapoints: 12138  |  Teacher Score: 10263 (100%)
    Good try Demi, you may also write in this way: ' It is 21h30 and I am learning English. In thirty minutes it will be 22h00. I almost finish my English course. Two hours before it was 19h00 and I was eating out with my colleagues. Thank you teachers! I wish you all a good day! From Demi
    Submitted over a year ago
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