Giving and Receiving
Instructions:
Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2
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When I had a birthday , I received a cell phone of my best friend, I would not have given him any presents until your birthday.
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good job!!
God bless you !
You say from my best friend.
and
until HIS birthday
When I had a birthday , I received a cell phone from my best friend, I would not give him any presents until his birthday.
¡Óptimo, Lis!
I agree with the comments from Murilo and Stefano88, but one more thing:
... any present until his birthday.
Congratulations,
Luiz
When I had a birthday,I received a cell phone from my best friend