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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Describing household objects.

Instructions: Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.

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Today is Sunday, I am take a rest and studying English now.
Yesterday is Saturday, Jun the 21th,2008.
Tomorrow is Monday, but I will be working. That day will Jun 22th,2008 of this week frist day.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • joy
    Mochapoints: 1908  |  Teacher Score: 773
    Today is Sunday. Currently, I am taking a break and studying English. Yesterday was Saturday, June 21st, 2008. Tomorrow is Monday, the 22nd, but I will be working. What is the day of the week?? Monday (we don't say the first day). but good job :-)
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  • Yuri_K
    Mochapoints: 49129  |  Teacher Score: 31519 (92%)
    H'm! Did you made all deliberately wrong? Today is Sunday, you are studying English carelessly. Yesterday it was Saturday, June the 21st, 2008. It will be Monday tomorrow, you are working. It will be June 22nd, the first day of the week.
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  • Eliz
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  • Eliz
    Mochapoints: 12138  |  Teacher Score: 10263 (100%)
    Nice piece of work Demi! There are some mistakes on the verb tenses. Most of them had been corrected by your friends. Keep on the good work. Cheers Eliz
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