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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 3

What are people doing?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

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At this time I put posta dress sports,yellow shirt,blue pants,white shoes
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  • Kiwi
    Mochapoints: 6368  |  Teacher Score: 2270 (0%)
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  • Kiwi
    Mochapoints: 6368  |  Teacher Score: 2270 (0%)
    I'm wearing posta sport dress , yellow shirt , blue pants and white shoes........good my freind....come on :)
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Orianne
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  • Orianne
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    At this time, I WEAR A SPORT dress OF posta, A yellow shirt, A PAIR OF blue pants, A PAIR OF white shoes. Wonderful mixed!!
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  • Debora C.
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  • Tatianna
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    Hello! You can say: I'm wearing... or I put on (if you dress at this time) Good job!
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  • Evylinda
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    Hi Pablo, I noticed that you haven't given what is required in this exercise.. You were asked to useboth POSITIVE and NEGATIVE attributes, describe what six people are doing: 1. woman 2. man 3. girl 4. boy 5. you 6. and 7. me EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed. This was your submission: At this time I put posta dress sports,yellow shirt,blue pants,white shoes YOU MAY WRITE: 1. The woman is cooking some food. She is not washing the dishes. 2. The man is driving his car. He is not riding a motorcycle. 3. The girl is wearing a yellow sweater. She is not wearing a coat. 4. The boy is playing soccer. He is not playing basketball. 5. You are working on your computer. You are not watching the show. 6. I am (me) putting on a sports dress,a yellow shirt, blue pants and white shoes. I am not dancing. ************************************** HEY! I DON'T KNOW IF MY SPANISH TRANSLATION IS CORRECT: Hola Pablo, Me di cuenta de que no ha dado lo que se requiere en este ejercicio .. Se le ha pedido que uso POSITIVO Y NEGATIVO atributos, describir lo que seis personas están haciendo: 1. mujer 2. hombre 3. niña 4. niño 5. tú 6. yo EX. Estoy comiendo alimentos en la mesa. Yo no soy de dormir en la cama. Esta fue su presentación: En este momento pongo posta de vestir deportivas, camisa amarilla, pantalón azul, zapatos blancos Puede escribir: 1. La mujer está cocinando algún alimento. Ella no es de lavar los platos. 2. El hombre conducía su automóvil. No es en una motocicleta. 3. La chica lleva un jersey amarillo. Ella es no llevar un abrigo. 4. El niño está jugando al fútbol. Él no está jugando al baloncesto. 5. Usted está trabajando en su computadora. Usted no está viendo el show. 6. I am (me) la puesta en el deporte un vestido, una camisa amarilla, pantalón azul y zapatos blancos. Yo no estoy bailando.
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  • candy
    Mochapoints: 4936  |  Teacher Score: 1510

    very well

    good luck

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  • candy
    Mochapoints: 4936  |  Teacher Score: 1510

    very well

    good luck

    Submitted over a year ago
  • candy
    Mochapoints: 4936  |  Teacher Score: 1510

    very well

    good luck

    Submitted over a year ago
  • nymphetamine
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    posta sport dress, a yellow shirt, a pair of blue pants and white shoes.

    jiaoyou! :D

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  • sirikan
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    I coat gene. And miniskirt
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  • candy
    Mochapoints: 4936  |  Teacher Score: 1510

    good

    good luck

    Submitted over a year ago
  • candy
    Mochapoints: 4936  |  Teacher Score: 1510

    good

    good luck

    Submitted over a year ago

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