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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

Millan's submission: Average Rating:
Hello !
I have gone on vacation the two first weeks of July.

We went to the beach, in Miramar (Spain).
A fantastic beach with thin and golden sand.
It was sunny.

In the beach we make castles, we swim, we bronze, we eat delecious fishes.

A day we went to "Terra Mitica", an amusement park, and the children enjoyded.

Now ... ! I am working !
Everything good is ended !
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    Mochapoints: 36520  |  Teacher Score: 28859 (100%)
    Very good. A few corrections: We went to the beach, in Miramar (Spain), a fantastic beach with thin and golden sand. It was sunny. On the beach we made castles, we swam, we tanned, we ate delicious fish. Oneday we went to "Terra Mitica", an amusement park, and the children enjoyed it. Now ... ! I am working ! Everything good is ended !
    Submitted over a year ago
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