Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I live with my family in Tehran.I only have 2 sisters and don't have any brothers.both of them are younger than me.one of them is 4 years and the other one is 14 years younger than me.I like both of them a lot,and I have always wanted them to be successful.my family isn't so big but we like each other and try to be more successful and try to overcome all problems together.
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I live with my family in Tehran. I only have 2 sisters, and/but I don't have any brothers. Both of them are younger than me. One of them is 4 years and the other one is 14 years younger than me [ex. They're four and fourteen years younger than me]. I like both of them a lot, and I have always wanted them to be successful. My family isn't so big, [remember comma before but] but we like each other and, try to be more successful and try to overcome all problems together.