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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

moussa's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is not thin, she is fat . the man is not short, he is tall. you are not a girl, you are a boy. you are not a boy, you are a girl. i am rich, im not poor, you are not rich, you are poor.
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  • 1983union
    Mochapoints: 3340  |  Teacher Score: 991 (100%)
    good job ,one spelling mistake "im not ..."
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • shehla
    Mochapoints: 496  |  Teacher Score: 196 (0%)
    well done
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • lucy
    Mochapoints: 216  |  Teacher Score: 56 (0%)
    I can not get you .Why you give me english ? You should give me chinese , then i can help yyou to correct it . But the english you write is right .
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  • lucy
    Mochapoints: 216  |  Teacher Score: 56 (0%)
    I can not get you .Why you give me english ? You should give me chinese , then i can help yyou to correct it . But the english you write is right .
    Submitted over a year ago
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