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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4

Describing Objects, Animals, and People

Instructions: Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.

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Did you lived in the villagery?there are have small rivers that the water is saft,many rough trees and store road. the villagery food is delicious whether hot or cool.so i think,you will be like the country life!
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  • HORUS
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  • Qwerty
    Mochapoints: 14332  |  Teacher Score: 9592 (100%)
    Good effort! Spelling- village, soft or safe Quality- Good job following directions! You described 6 objects: the village, rivers, water, trees, road, and food. Remember: Use a capital letter to start each sentence. Grammar- Let me help you with some corrections: Did you [live] in the [village]? or [Do] you [live] in the [village]? There are small rivers with [safe (or) soft] water, many rough trees, and [a short] road. The [village] food is delicious, whether hot or cold. So, I think you will like the country life! Keep trying! :)
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