Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I am living with my mother and my young sister. First, my mother is 50 years old. What can tell about her? She is a wonderful mother. She always give me a lot of useful advice. She also encourages me when I fail. Moreover, she is the person whom I believe best. Besides, to me, she is a great chef. I never resist dishes which she cooks. Second, my young sister is just 14 years old. Sometimes, she drives me a bit crazy because of her jokes. However, I know she loves me a lot and vice versa. It's difficult for me to describe my mother and my sister. I just can say that I love them very much.
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I am living with my mother and my young sister. First, my mother is 50 years old. What can tell about her? She is a wonderful mother. She always gives me a lot of useful advice. She also encourages me when I fail. Moreover, she is the person whom I believe the most. Besides, to me, she is a great chef. I can never resist dishes which she cooks. Second, my young sister is just 14 years old. Sometimes, she drives me a bit crazy because of her jokes. However, I know she loves me a lot and vice versa. It's difficult for me to describe my mother and my sister. All I can say is that I love them very much.