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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

steve's submission: Average Rating:
the woman is fat and short
the men is strong end young
the boy is blond end hard
the girl is nice end small
i'm italian end beginner
you are tired and smoker
Submitted over a year ago

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  • shobelloby
    Mochapoints: 2613  |  Teacher Score: 333 (0%)
    No punctuation marks. It should be "I'm italian AND A beginner. You are tired and A smoker."
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  • zooey
    Mochapoints: 950  |  Teacher Score: 76 (0%)

    The woman is fat and short .The men is strong and young. The boy is blond and hard (lovely and clever) The girl is nice and small (beautiful) I'm italian and  a beginner. You are tired and a smoker.

    You should take more attention to the capital letters and the punctuations.

    And as a beginner,not too bad/

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