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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 1

Describe the location of your city and country

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.

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Hello everyone, I'm Bruce from China, I am glad to be here as a memeber in our community Livemocha.
It's really an exciting minute to meet new friends with different culture background, from all around the world!
It's a benefical hour to talk person to person, exchanging diferent points, building up things in common.
It's definitely a good day to be with you, as I know, you are on my side.
It's helpful for years to master a foreign language to enrich the understanding between peoples.
In the end, it's great to know for the whole life that, you are my friend.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Ray
    Mochapoints: 3285  |  Teacher Score: 2975 (0%)
    Well done Bruce. Just a couple of things. Here are two suggestions Bruce. It's really an exciting time to meet new friends with different cultural backgrounds, from all around the world! It takes years to master a foreign language to enrich the understanding between people.
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  • bella cullen
    Mochapoints: 3954  |  Teacher Score: 1456 (0%)
    Hello everyone, I'm Bruce from China, I am glad to be here as a member in our community Livemocha. It's really an exciting place to meet new friends with different culture backgrounds from all around the world! It's a great time to talk person to person, exchange different points of view, and find out how we relate. It's definitely a good day to be with you, as I know, you are on my side. It's helpful for years to master a foreign language to enrich the understanding between peoples. In the end, it's great to know for the whole life that you are my friend. Great job!!!!!!
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  • matejaqi
    Mochapoints: 1750  |  Teacher Score: 1309 (100%)
    Very good! Here is one part that I would rewrite: It's really exciting when you are meeting new friends from all around the world with different culture background. It's a great way to talk to new friends over the internet, where we can exchange different points of view and build up things in common.
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  • ♥ Ziba ♥
    Mochapoints: 21343  |  Teacher Score: 13078 (97%)
    非常好!加油!
    Submitted over a year ago

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