English Writing Exercise

My Country

Please introduce the country you live in. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?

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yuebingtu
It's half pass seventeen for Beijing Time now. Fifteen minutes ago,it was a quater pass senenteen,and thirty minutes ago, it was seventeen.
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Submitted: 2009-02-12 03:59:36




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  • 2009-02-11 13:21:10
    mohamed محمد ا...
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    It's half past seventeen in Beijing now. Fifteen minutes ago;it was a quarter past senenteen,and thirty minutes ago, it was seventeen

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  • 2009-02-12 03:59:36
    Sam Peters
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    Good attempt.

    It is now half past five. Fifteen minutes ago it was fifteen minutes past five. Thirty minutes ago it was five o' clock.

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