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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4

My Country

Instructions: Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?

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It's half pass seventeen for Beijing Time now. Fifteen minutes ago,it was a quater pass senenteen,and thirty minutes ago, it was seventeen.
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  • mohamed الشقي...
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    It's half past seventeen in Beijing now. Fifteen minutes ago;it was a quarter past senenteen,and thirty minutes ago, it was seventeen

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  • Sam Peters
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    Good attempt.

    It is now half past five. Fifteen minutes ago it was fifteen minutes past five. Thirty minutes ago it was five o' clock.

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