English Writing Exercise
Famous Landmarks
Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?
I would love to talk about my mom.she is a very simple women in lots of people 's eye.she hates make up cause she think it'll bad for her skin.I'm deeply grateful for her love to me .she's not very beautiful,but she's the best and the most important in my life.
Submitted: 2009-03-02 01:57:38
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Very good attempt. Try again please.
I would like to talk about my mum. She is a very simple woman in many people's eyes. She hates make-up as she believes it is bad for the skin. I'm deeply grateful for her love for me. She is not very beautiful but she is the best mum and the most important person in my life.
in lots of people 's eyes
she hate to make up because she thinking it'll be bad for her skin
I am deeply grateful to her for my love.
she's not very beautiful,but she's the best and the most important person in my life.
以上的这些句子，仅仅只是我发现的一点点问题。希望对你有帮助，谢谢你对我的信任！
I love to talk about my mum;she is a very simple person .she hates make up because she thinks; it'll bad for her skin.I'm deeply grateful for her love to me .she's not very beautiful,but she's the best and the most important person in my life.
Hi Yuebingtu--I enjoyed reading your lesson. Here are my comments:
I would love to talk about my mom.
In the eyes of many people, she is a very simple woman.
She does not like make-up because she thinks it will be bad for her skin.
I am deeply grateful for her love.
She is not very beautiful, but she is the best and most important person in my life.
Your mom is a very beautiful person on the inside in her heart. I am sure you are thankful that she is your mom.
God's Blessings
Karashemshek