English Writing Exercise My occupation
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, please describe your occupation. What do you do? Do you like what you do? How long have you been working in this field? Did you always want to be in this occupation?
There is a big festival in my town. It is "hi-maturi". "Hi" means "fire", and "maturi" means "festival". So, it's Fire Festival. The festival take*s* place on August 15, every year. In that festival, we can see 108 single fire*s* and a lot of big fireworks. (where it says 108 singe fires we put an s at the end of the noun because it is plural.)
I see....φ(._. )
Thank you!
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It is CALLED himaturi. The festival takeS place on August 15, every year. In THIS festival, we can see 108 single fires, and a lot of big fire works.
Very Good!!! Just a couple small mistakes.
Thank you, bigdoug616!!^^
It is contains some minimal errors but hey, good job! Keep it up!
結構、正確に書かれていると思ったんですけどね。
やっぱりネイティブの人が見ると違うんですね。