English Writing Exercise Directions to your house
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, provide directions for a guest from the nearest bus stop to your house. Which direction should your guest go? Where should he turn? What will he see on his way to your house? How will he recognize your house?
I'm graduated in 1998 I graduated in 1998
You did very well, my friend, Nancy!
Hello Nancy. Very good. Here are some corrections in red.
I studied at Yunnan University. I graduated in 1998 and the subjects that I liked were Chinese and English.(This is correct but sounds strange to a native English speaker)
MAYBE LIKE THIS
I graduated from Yunnan University in 1998, where I majored in Chinese and English.
Good.
I graduated from Yunan University in !998. My favorite subjecta were Chinese and English.
I graduated in.....
good work !!
Just the one small change by AbundantMan and it is perfect.
Sorry I have not been on QQ at a good time.
Very good Nancy.
I studied at Yunnan University. I'm graduated in 1998, and the subjects that I liked were Chinese and English.
I used a comma after 1998 and before the conjunction and. Without this you have a run-on sentence, which is two complete clauses/sentences connected by a comma. You cannot join two sentences like this. You need to use a conjunction or make them separate.
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Very good.
I studied at Yunnan University. I'm I graduated in 1998. and The subjects that I liked were Chinese and English.
Very good!
Excellent! The only correction: I graduated in 1998... Keep up the good work!
I graduated...
very good job!
I studied at Yunnan University and graduated in 1998.
The subjects that I liked were Chinese and English.