Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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My hair is blonde and long. The color of my eyes is brown. And I don't have any facial hair.
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I have long and blond hair ....
Very good ...
brief but excellent - The color of my eyes are brown.
your first sentence is correct!
While you do not have facial hair you should remember that you can always trust a man who has hair on his face.
Hello Aparecida,
Good lesson. Allow me to make a few corrections for you.
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My hair is blonde and long. The color of my eyes is are brown. And I don't have any facial hair.
(never begain a sentence with the word "and"!!!!)
or ...
My hair is blonde and long. The color of my eyes are brown and I don't have any facial hair.
(here the word "and" is used as a "conjunction" - look up that word!!)
blue - grammar and style corrections.
I hope this helps you. Keep Practicing!!!!
Great!