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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

pankaj's submission: Average Rating:
did you saw my picture? I have black color hairs, my hairs are long and also cut stylish. I like long and curly hairs. My eyes color are black . I don't have facial hairs , also i don't like to do it, becouse it wast of our time and money.
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  • Diana
    Mochapoints: 13013  |  Teacher Score: 1283 (100%)

    1- Did you see my picture?

    2 - I have black hair - don't use "hairs"

    3 - My eyes's color is black.

    4 - I don't have a facial hair, I don't like to shave also, because it wastes our time and money.

     

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  • pankaj
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