Describe an area in your city
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4
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Because of my profile picture, sometimes people misunderstand that I'm younger than my real age
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
I took the picture about three years ago and now I'm in my mid-thirties.
If you look up and down the picture, you'll find it's natural to think so.
In the picture, I have a round face.
I have my hair cut shortly and it's color is black.
My hair isn't parted but is handled like that of little boys.
And more, I wear a red colored casual shirts.
As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count even the number of my beard now. It's a kind of inborn thing.
Telling the truth, I pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen old as my age is the better especially when I'm in my business.
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::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | Teacher Score: 2261 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | Teacher Score: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | Teacher Score: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
::Sandra::Mochapoints: 10133 | Teacher Score: 2261 (0%)
well done, Richard.. Your english is very good Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Carlim BarrosoMochapoints: 371 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Carlim BarrosoMochapoints: 371 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)
very good !!! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 3055 | Teacher Score: 2273 (100%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 3055 | Teacher Score: 2273 (100%)
The first few sentences were perfect, so I don't repeat them. Suggested corrections follow. I'm not sure what you mean by "I can count even the number of my beard now" My hair isn't parted but is styled like that of little boys. Futhermore, I wear red colored casual shirts. As you see, I almost don't have facial hair and actually I can count the number of hairs in my beard. It's a kind of genetic thing. To tell the truth, I am pleased to hear that I look young, but sometimes to be seen as old as my age is better especially in my business. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Loren BergesonMochapoints: 3055 | Teacher Score: 2273 (100%)
I'm sorry, in my previous post I said you needed to replace "inborn" with "genetic". I checked my dictionary, and "inborn" is indeed correct: "It's a kind of inborn thing". I should be more careful and check my dictionary more often. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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