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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I am yinyujuan .I have a black hair which is short and shine .I have a short nose and black eye .I am a common girl .
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    Mochapoints: 931  |  Teacher Score: 368 (0%)
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    Mochapoints: 931  |  Teacher Score: 368 (0%)
    Hi Bossqin ! Great - very good. Only some small changes. Better to say : I am Yinyu Juan. I have black hair which is short and shiny. I have a short nose and black eyes. I am a normal girl. Take care Debs
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