English Writing Exercise

Describe an area in your city

Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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I am yinyujuan .I have a black hair which is short and shine .I have a short nose and black eye .I am a common girl .
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Submitted: 2008-04-19 17:59:21




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  • 2008-04-19 17:54:52
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  • 2008-04-19 17:59:21
    debs
    Hi Bossqin ! Great - very good. Only some small changes. Better to say : I am Yinyu Juan. I have black hair which is short and shiny. I have a short nose and black eyes. I am a normal girl. Take care Debs
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