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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Yesterday, when I went to the park, I did my homework, I was lying on the grass. It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining and I could feel the nature so calm around me.There wasn't children, no noise whom disturbed me in my work. I could read, write and spend my time comfortably outside my house. Normally when I decide to do something outside and specially in the park, the weather turns bad.
so, it's why I spent a good time.
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  • Nanadoodle
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    Yesterday, when I went to the park, I did my homework. I was lying on the grass. It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining and I could feel the nature so calm around me. There wasn't were no children, no noise whom to disturb ed me in my work. I could read, write and spend my time comfortably outside my house. Normally when I decide to do something outside and especially in the park, the weather turns bad. So, it's why that is why I   spent a good  enjoyed the time.   This is good, very easy to understand - just a few minor mistakes in grammar.

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