Going Shopping
Instructions:
Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4
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The last time when I went shopping, It was the last month, to buy a laptop. It didn't cost me too dear because it was in promotion. I waited long time to offer it to me, because I had not enough money. Now I am glad, it works very well, and with it, I can share many differents things with my friends, as pictures, video and so on.
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The last time when I went shopping, It was the last month to buy a laptop. It didn't cost me too dear much because it was in a promotion. I waited a long time to offer buy it to me, because I had not did not have enough money. Now I am glad. It works very well, and with it, I can share many differents things with my friends, such as pictures, videos and so on. This is well written and the grammar mistakes are small ones. Good work