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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4

My Country

Instructions: Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?

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Now it's 20:36 in the evening, fifteen minutes ago, it was 8:21 pm, thirty minutes earlier, the time was six minutes past 8 pm!

Then what about 10 years ago? I was still in high school, taking lessons day after day. Well, we suddenly find what is so important for ourselves, then something ironic happens, No time, the past is passed. Then never look back, just look forward to what is precious to us, try to catch it, grasp it, never let it go.
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