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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

REEE&İSSS's submission: Average Rating:
she is tall . the women isn't thin. He isnt rich , he is poor.
you are very tall you arent short. I like tall girls because tall girls looking atractive.
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  • Rachel
    Mochapoints: 469  |  Teacher Score: 342 (0%)

    Don't forget to use apostrophes when you make contractions, such as in "isn't."  Also, the last sentence should read "tall girls look attractive."

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  • Mari Braga
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    She is tall. The womearen't thin / The woman isn't thin. He isn't rich, he is poor. You are very tall, you aren't short. I like tall girls because tall girls they look atractive.

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