Running Errands
Instructions:
Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2
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Every day , after wake up, I need to go to the grocery store to buy bread. Then I have to get ready to go to the work. I usually go by company´s bus, but sometime my boyfriend takes me there in his car.
On the weekend, I like to shopping at the mall with my friends. As a like to spend money, I need getting money at the bank to buy something that I want to.
On the weekend, I like to shopping at the mall with my friends. As a like to spend money, I need getting money at the bank to buy something that I want to.
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As i like to spend money, i need to get money at the bank to buy something that i want.
Very good. You are getting better.
Every day, after I wake up, I need to go to the grocery store to buy bread. Then I have to get ready to go to the work. I usually go by the company's bus, but sometimes my boyfriend takes me there in his car. On the weekend, I like to go shopping at the mall with my friends. As I a like to spend money, I need to get getting money from at the bank to buy something that I want. to.
after I wake up
to go to the work
sometimes
I like to do shopping
as I like
I need to get money
something I want to