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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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I do not like shopping. Therefore I do not go shopping often, and when I do, I feel like I waste my time. Actually I prefer to buy throught my computer because I don't have to queue up. However sometimes I am compelled to go shopping because I want to try what I will buy.

The last time I went shopping, I bought a pink pair of pants since I had to go to a wedding. It cost 25 euros. Just kidding, it was a black pair of pants !
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  • savi
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    Bonjour Djamalus, I do not like shopping. Therefore I do not go shopping often and when I do, I feel like I AM wastING my time. Actually I prefer BUYING through my computer because I don't have to queue up. You can also write it as.......... I PREFER BUYING ONLINE AS I DON'T.......................... However, sometimes I am compelled to go shopping WHEN I want to try ON what I will buy. The last time I went shopping, I bought a pair of PINK pants since I had to go to a wedding. It cost 25 euros. Just kidding, it was a pair of BLACK pants ! Well done! Pink pants? Good joke... :)
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  • trevva29
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    Hi Djamalus, You must have been a hit in those pink pants :)!! This is excellent writing. Just a few suggestions: I do not like shopping, therefore I do not go shopping often. When I do, I feel like I am wasting my time. Actually, I prefer to buy through ... . However, ... I want to try on what I will buy. (pair of pink pants and pair of black pants - the adjective goes in front of the noun). Again, good work!
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  • carmemsmrocha
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    I liked your sense of humor! hahahah :-)
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