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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5

Describe Your Home Tools

Instructions: List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?

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Today is Saturday, 20th 2008. It is kind of cold since it is 20°C, I mean 55°F, and it is sunny. So, as the weather is rather good, I plan to go rollerskating to the park today.

Tomorrow the weather will the same, that is to say, sunny, and about 55°F.

Basically this week-end, there is a good weather, therefore I enjoy it. Lucky me !!!!
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  • trevva29
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    Today is Saturday, September 20, 2008. ... to go rollerskating in the park today. Tomorrow the weather will be the same, ... Basically, this weekend there will be good weather, therefore I will enjoy it. Go have fun this weekend!
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  • sara
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    Today is Saturday, SEPTEMBER 20th, 2008. It is kind of cold since it is 20°C, I mean 55°F, and it is sunny. So, as the weather is rather good, I plan to go rollerskating IN the park today. Tomorrow the weather will the same, that is to say, sunny, and about 55°F. Basically this week-end, the weather will be good, therefore I will enjoy it. Lucky me !!!! Very, very good - you just forgot to add the month of September and a couple of prepositions, and the change to future tense in the last sentence, but other than that - perfect
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  • savi
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    Hi Djamalus, Good work! The minor corrections needed have already been made by Trevva and Sara. Enjoy your weekend!
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  • Owen
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    Today is Saturday, 20th 2008.(September 20th) It is kind of cold since it is 20°C, I mean 55°F, and it is sunny. So, as the weather is rather good, I plan to go rollerskating to (IN) the park today. Tomorrow the weather will (be) the same, that is to say, sunny, and about 55°F. Basically this week-end, there is a (will have)good weather, therefore I (will) enjoy it. Lucky me !!!!
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  • Katie
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    Today is Saturday the 20th , 2008 It's kind of cold since it is 20C, I mean 55F, and it's sunny.( you need to use contractions, apostrophes in informal writing) Because the weather's quite good, I'm planning to go rollerskating in the park today.("Because" and "quite" are less formal and more used the "So" and Rather) Tomorow the weather's going to be the same, sunny, and about 55F.( That is to say , is not used often in English, so you could just miss it out) Basically this weekend, there's going to be good weather, so I'm going to enjoy it.(contractions again!! use the future tense as the activities you are doing are all in the future) Good work with some tricky words Katie
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  • djamalus
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    thank you for your comments
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