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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 3

Weekly Routines

Instructions: What are your weekly routines? Are there things you do every day? Every week? Every other week? How often?

sascia's submission: Average Rating:
Everyday, in the morning, I go to school for my work as chemistry teacher. In the afternoon I prepare my lessons or, when I'm free from charge for school, I go to the country at my olive trees.
Every week I go with my wife at commercial center for shopping.
Submitted over a year ago

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  • Carla
    Mochapoints: 15118  |  Teacher Score: 13438 (100%)
    Well done. I would change "at" to "to"......."TO my olive trees" or to be more specific, "to care for my olive trees" and "TO THE commercial center " (in America we would say either "downtown" for the commercial area of the city, or "the mall" or "shopping center" for an independent place. Also, I would say "when I'm free from school". We do sometimes refer to students as "charges", but it's not used often.
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  • monica
    Mochapoints: 2438  |  Teacher Score: 102 (0%)
    ciao sascia! i think you are better than me at english! carla's comment is usefull for both of us! so, congratulations!
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  • colabama
    Mochapoints: 1712  |  Teacher Score: 1072 (0%)
    dear sascia,carla's comments say it all.you continue to improve every time i look at your work.best wishes,my friend,marie
    Submitted over a year ago
  • GB Fred
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    .. as _a chemistry teacher. .. when I'm free from _ _ school duties, I go to [tend / see / ..] my olive trees in the country. Every week I go shopping with my wife {in the town centre-GB / downtown-USA}.

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  • RUBÉN DARÍO VIL...
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    EXCELLENT.

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    PERFECT.

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  • Noa
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    Well done dear teacher! I agree Carla' s corrections. I want to see your olive trees :} I miss you very much. Best wishes Noa

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