English Writing Exercise

My shopping cart

Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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corinto
The last place that I visited on vacation was the beach.It´s not so far to my house.It´s almost forty minutes and the way to arrive there is quite.
Well,my friends and I just payed two dollars to go to the beach.I passed a beautiful day.
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Submitted: 2008-11-24 23:23:16




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  • 2008-11-24 23:23:15
    Tony
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    Hi Corinto, Good job. A couple of corrections. I'm not sure what you meant about the way to arrive at the beach, so I'll guess. Here goes: The last place that I visited on vacation was the beach. It's not TOO far to my house. It´s almost forty minutes, and the way to arrive there is quite easy(?). Well, my friends and I just PAID two dollars to go to the beach. I SPENT a beautiful day AT THE BEACH.
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