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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

My shopping cart

Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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The last place that I visited on vacation was the beach.It´s not so far to my house.It´s almost forty minutes and the way to arrive there is quite.
Well,my friends and I just payed two dollars to go to the beach.I passed a beautiful day.
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  • Tony
    Mochapoints: 80290  |  Teacher Score: 68429 (99%)
    Hi Corinto, Good job. A couple of corrections. I'm not sure what you meant about the way to arrive at the beach, so I'll guess. Here goes: The last place that I visited on vacation was the beach. It's not TOO far to my house. It´s almost forty minutes, and the way to arrive there is quite easy(?). Well, my friends and I just PAID two dollars to go to the beach. I SPENT a beautiful day AT THE BEACH.
    Submitted over a year ago
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