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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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The woman has long black hair. She does not have short hair. The man is bald. He has no hair. The girl has curly hair. She does not have straight hair. The boy has short hair. He does not have long hair. You and me have black hair. We do not have brown hair.
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  • Henrique _ 恩裏克
    Mochapoints: 81637  |  Teacher Score: 62304 (97%)

    Good, but... i have long hair ;-)

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    Submitted over a year ago
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  • peachy
    Mochapoints: 1934  |  Teacher Score: 484 (0%)

    Yeah, Ike! hehehe Thanks...

    Peachy
    Submitted over a year ago
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