English Writing Exercise
Your last vacation
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
On the last vacation, I went to Beijing with my best friend Elaine. We visited some interesting places. The last place we vacationed is the Mutianyu Great Wall. It is very grand, and I will recommend it to you.
It is only 20 kilometers away from the Jingcheng Expressway, located in Huairou district of Beijing. According to the historic record, this part of the Great Wall was built by the General Xuda, who served the Emperor Zhu Yuanzhang in early Ming Dynasty, on the ruins of the Great Wall in North-Qi Dynasty. The Mutianyu Scenic Spot is hugged by maintouns with beautiful natural scenery. It enjoys fame of " Mutianyu is particularly elegant of the Great Wall" both in China and abroad. If you have a chance, you may go there to visit with your own eyes.
It is only 20 kilometers away from the Jingcheng Expressway, located in Huairou district of Beijing. According to the historic record, this part of the Great Wall was built by the General Xuda, who served the Emperor Zhu Yuanzhang in early Ming Dynasty, on the ruins of the Great Wall in North-Qi Dynasty. The Mutianyu Scenic Spot is hugged by maintouns with beautiful natural scenery. It enjoys fame of " Mutianyu is particularly elegant of the Great Wall" both in China and abroad. If you have a chance, you may go there to visit with your own eyes.
Submitted: 2009-01-28 11:47:20
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On the last vacation, I went to Beijing with my best friend Elaine. We visited some interesting places. The last place we went to is the Mutianyu Great Wall. It is very grand and I will recommend it to you. It is only 20 kilometers away from the Jingcheng Expressway, located in Huairou district of Beijing. According to the historical records, this part of the Great Wall was built by the General Xuda, who served the Emperor Zhu Yuanzhang in early Ming Dynasty, on the ruins of the Great Wall in North-Qi Dynasty. The Mutianyu Scenic Spot is hugged by mountains with beautiful natural scenery. It enjoys fame of " Mutianyu is a particularly elegant part of the Great Wall" both in China and abroad. If you have a chance, you should go there to see this with your own eyes.
just little mistake.... well good job...
On the my last vacation, I went to Beijing with my best friend Elaine. We visited some interesting places. The last place we vacationed is the Mutianyu Great Wall. It is very grand, and I will recommend it to you. It is only 20 kilometers away from the Jingcheng Expressway, located in Huairou district of Beijing. According to the historical record, this part of the Great Wall was built by the General Xuda, who served the Emperor Zhu Yuanzhang in the early Ming Dynasty, on the ruins of the Great Wall in built during the North-Qi Dynasty. The Mutianyu Scenic Spot is hugged by maintouns mountains with beautiful natural scenery. It enjoys reviews which give it fame, such as fame of " Mutianyu is a particularly elegant part of the Great Wall", both in China and abroad. If you have a chance, you may go there to visit see with your own eyes.
With the exception of 1 spelling error, Perfect!
You are a terrific writer.Obviously you have a talent for language. Keep up the good work!!