Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The old man has white hair. He has not black hair. The young woman has short blue hair. She has not long brawn hair. The girl has long blond hair.She has not shot black hair. The boy has short hair. He has not long hair. I have a long black hair. I dont have a short blond hair. How hasa black mustache? you have a black mustache. =))
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The old man has white hair. He has not black hair. The young woman has short blue hair. She has not long brawn hair. The girl has long blond hair.She has not shot black hair. The boy has short hair. He has not long hair. I have a long black hair. I dont have a short blond hair. How has a black mustache? you have a black mustache. =))
She has not long brown hair.
She has not short black hair.
I don't have a short blond hair.
Who has a black moustache?
You have a black moustache.
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@ Nadia
making corrections, without any correction of the wrong words, doesn't make any sense for other people.