English Writing Exercise

Describing Objects

Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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hanya
I'm a student now,and I wanted to be a police men .
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Submitted: 2008-04-12 19:31:03




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  • 2008-04-12 19:28:39
    Charley Garrett
    Hanya, Very good writing. Just one little point to share with you, okay? "policeman" or "policewoman". When it is one person, it's spelled "man", instead of "men". You're going very fast! Charley
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  • 2008-04-12 19:29:52
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  • 2008-04-12 19:31:03
    Charley Garrett
    Hanya, I think it didn't save my last comment. You write very well. This time there is just a point of spelling. "policeman" or "policewoman". When it is just one person, it is spelled "man" instead of "men". You're progressing very fast. Charley
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