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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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The profile picture is a sculpture of mine. It was made by my friend last year. He is a very good sculptor. My hair is black and little short, my eyes color is also dark. I have any facial hair.
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  • Yuli
    Mochapoints: 5338  |  Teacher Score: 1879 (100%)
    Oh,the nice sculpture is just yourself! It's interesting and very nice. Yuli
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    I haven't any facial hair"...But apart from that, like the sculpture,your submission is excellent!....Well done to both you and your friend!
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    good submission! see the other comments.
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