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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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i am going to work by car
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  • Larry Kurzer
    Mochapoints: 1768  |  Teacher Score: 895 (0%)
    It´s a start. Suggestion. ORIGINAL i am going to work by car. I (capitalize beginning of sentence) go to work by car. Also, think about where else you go. Example, by bicycle to the park, to the mountains by car, etc.
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  • ︴★J※馨♥忆※★E︴
    Mochapoints: 22280  |  Teacher Score: 10297 (98%)
    jajaj, Juan, do you like to have a party? :)
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  • Persia
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    I am going to work by car.

    Good, but not enough! Writing more will help you to improve, amigo!

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