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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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I wroter a letter to my friend yesterday moring, and I taught students lesson senven. Afternoon I went to shopping with my son.
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  • jww1066
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    Very good. You have some small errors, mostly just spelling: You wrote: I wroter a letter It should be: I wrote a letter You wrote: yesterday moring It should be: yesterday morning You wrote: lesson senven It should be: lesson seven You wrote: I went to shopping It should be: I went shopping James
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    I agree with jww1066, but also, one addition Afternoon I went shopping with my son In the afternoon I went shopping with my son. It is ok to say when speaking, but when writing it is better to say "in the afternoon."
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