Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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My brother is young , and his father is old but my mother is very pretty and funny , my wife is tall and thin, my brother in law is short and ugly too.
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My brother is young. His father is old. My mother is very pretty and funny. My wife is tall and thin. My brother in law is short and ugly too.
You did a good job but your sentences were too long. Only use the word "but" when you are going to say something opposite after the "but". I guess you do not like your brother in law.
My brother is young, his father is old, my mother is very pretting and funny, my wife is tall and thin, but my brother in law is short and ugly.
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