English Writing Exercise
Describing People
Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.
My brother is young , and his father is old but my mother is very pretty and funny , my wife is tall and thin, my brother in law is short and ugly too.
Submitted: 2009-10-10 09:42:59
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My brother is young. His father is old. My mother is very pretty and funny. My wife is tall and thin. My brother in law is short and ugly too.
You did a good job but your sentences were too long. Only use the word "but" when you are going to say something opposite after the "but". I guess you do not like your brother in law.
My brother is young, his father is old, my mother is very pretting and funny, my wife is tall and thin, but my brother in law is short and ugly.
mucho but/and not necessary