Describing Objects, Animals, and People
Instructions:
Use the new adjectives from this lesson to describe the activities of six objects, animals, and people. EX. The old, heavy elephant is sitting in a clean, quiet place.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 4
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When time I going to grocery shopping, I buy fruits and vegetables.
I buy fruit, such as melons, cucumbers, apples, oranges, bananas, and pineapples. I buy vegetables, such as tomatoes, cabbage, lemons, carrot and so on.
I buy fruit, such as melons, cucumbers, apples, oranges, bananas, and pineapples. I buy vegetables, such as tomatoes, cabbage, lemons, carrot and so on.
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LUCIA Mochapoints: 440 | Teacher Score: 80 (0%)Good try when i go to a grocery fro shopping, I buy fruits, such as: melosn, cucumbers,apples,oranges bananas and pineapples. And I buy vegetables such as tomatoes, cabbage, lemons and carrots among others. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
Mochapoints: 5994 | Teacher Score: 5144 (0%)This was very good, well done: When I go grocery shopping, I buy fruits and vegtables such as, melons, apples, lemons, oranges bananas and pineapples, cucumbers, tomatoes, cabbage carrots and so on. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
annaMochapoints: 1378 | Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
This is all fine except the first sentence should be "when i go grocery shopping...." Well done. Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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