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Japanese Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

Toshi wo totta hito wa hagete imasu. Wakai hito wa hagete imasen. Kanojo wa kuroi makige wo shite imasu. Watashi wa nagakute chairoi kami wo shiteimasu. Otoko no ko ha akai kami wo shiteimasen. Kare wa kinpatsu desu. Dansei wa akai ago hige to kuchi hige wo shiteimasu. Zyosei wa ago hige ga arimasen. Kanozyo wa mijikakute kuroi kami wo shiteimasu.

年を取った人は禿げています。若い人は禿げていません。彼女は黒い巻き毛をしています。私は長くて茶色い髪をしています。男の子は赤い髪をしていません。彼は金髪です。男性は赤いあごひげと口ひげをしています。女性はあごひげがありません。彼女は短くて黒い髪をしています。

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  • Ricardo Machado
    Mochapoints: 28122  |  Teacher Score: 4927 (100%)
    Very, very good, Novina! Only: josei, and not Jooosei! Keep it up!
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  • kazuu
    Mochapoints: 15999  |  Teacher Score: 2838 (97%)
    女性→josei, do not speak "jo-osei" But all,very,very good from kazuu
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  • son-gokuu
    Mochapoints: 18544  |  Teacher Score: 4955 (100%)

    どんどん上手になりますねぇ!

    Well done!

    がんばってくださいね。

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  • sari
    Mochapoints: 3823  |  Teacher Score: 1125 (100%)

    It's almost parfect!! Bravo!!!!

    But it woud be better to read :

    女性 =じょせいjosei

     not joosei.

    You've done very well!!

    Submitted over a year ago
  • yoshida
    Mochapoints: 8540  |  Teacher Score: 6318 (100%)
    Great! I see all of your Japanese.
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  • XCG
    Mochapoints: 1318  |  Teacher Score: 81 (0%)
    いいだと思っています。続いて頑張りますね!
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  • kenji
    Mochapoints: 1599  |  Teacher Score: 776 (100%)

    皆さんがコメントしているように、女性のところを直した方がいいですね。

    それから、老人と少年のイントネーションを直すとすごくよくなります。

    ノヴィナさん うじんは

    正しい発音  ろじんは

    黄色のところが、高い音になっています。ノヴィナさんの場合は高くて強い音になっています。

    son-gokuu さんの朗読を参考にさせてもらい違いを感じてみてください。

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  • topogigio
    Mochapoints: 8993  |  Teacher Score: 530 (0%)
    good
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  • motoari
    Mochapoints: 13026  |  Teacher Score: 10870 (99%)

    とっても上手です。

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