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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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Onnanohito wa kuruma no ue ni imasu to Otokonohito wa doa no tokoro imasu. Watashi wa te-buru no tokoro ni imasu.
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  • crappygerman
    Mochapoints: 3584  |  Teacher Score: 930 (100%)

    1) There are no spaces in between words in Japanese.

    2) You should try to type in hiragana. You can install the language pack in Windows under control panel.

    3) I am not sure what was taught in your lesson but I think we use のところto refer to bigger places. It seems to sound unnatural.

    4)とis not a good way to link two unrelated sentences in Japanese. It is better to link two nouns.

    女の人は車の上にいます。男はドアのところにいます。私はテーブルのところにいます。

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