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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 4

When and where?

Instructions: Describe where six people are going and at what time: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The man is going to the restaurant at eight o’clock.

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Josei ha shichiji han ni resutoran ni tabeni iku tsumori desu. Dansei ha shuumatsu ni terebi wo mitari, kompyutaa ni nyuuryoku shitari suru tsumori desu. Onna no ko ha doyoubi ni gakkou e ikanai tsumori desu. Otoko no ko ha ashita gozen rokuji ni jitensha ni norinagara ongaku o kiku tsumori desu. Watashi ha shichiji goro puuru e oyogini iku tsumori desu. Anata wa kaigi ni shusseki suru tsumori desu.
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  • ryba
    Mochapoints: 41650  |  Teacher Score: 37378 (97%)

    fine , keep doing, look at native speaker hints

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  • Erica
    Mochapoints: 18091  |  Teacher Score: 2132 (0%)

    Wow, this is really good!

    if we could know what the man is going to input in the computer , the sentence will be perfect.

    ex;konpyuta- ni ikutukano deita (some data)wo nyuuryoku suru tsumoridesu.

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