Japanese Writing Exercise

Describing People

Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.

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Victoria
男の人は年を取っています

女の子は背が低いです

男の子は太っています

女の人は金持ちです

あなたは背が高いです

私は女です
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Submitted: 2008-08-10 10:24:44




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  • 2008-07-19 11:47:51
    ts
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  • 2008-07-19 11:47:53
    ts
    Right! You are doing great!better than my poor English. Also it is right how to use Kanji. 男の人は、年を取っています。 女の子は、背が低いです。 ' 、 ' ' 。 ’  OK?
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  • 2008-07-22 03:41:55
    nekosama
    Almost perfect!! Just one thing: We put a period “。” at the end of a sentence, which is the same as English!. (I think…umm…a comma “、” is not needed in such a short sentence. >ts comment) がんばってくださいね。b
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  • 2008-08-10 10:24:44
    Victoria
    Thank you both for your comments on my submission! I shall work hard on my punctuation :)
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