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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 2

What are you doing this week?

Instructions: What are you doing this week? What activities are you doing? When? Which days will be the busiest?

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Kono mokuyoubi wa Roma ni daigatsu ni ikimasu. Watashi no senmon aimasu. Kinyoubi wa watashi no tomodachi wa aimasu. Watashitachi wa Piazza di Spagna ni ikimasu!Ato de watashi no uchi ni kaerimasu.
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  • tuly0321
    Mochapoints: 92490  |  Teacher Score: 82910 (100%)

    (Kono) mokuyoubi wa Roma ni, daigatsuku ni ikimasu. Watashi no senmon no kougi ga aimasu. Kinyoubi wa watashi no tomodachi wato aimasu. Watashitachi wa Piazza di Spagna ni ikimasu! Sonoato de watashi no uchi ni kaerimasu.

    I rarely say kono mokuyoubi. It's enough to say mokuyoubi. When I want to make it clear, I say konsyuu no mokuyoubi.

    Roma ni daigaku ni ikimasu needs "、". Because it combins two sentences, Roma ni ikumasu and daigaku ni ikimasu. (I go to Roma and a college.) You can also say Roma no daigaku ni ikimasu. It means I go to a college in Roma.

    senmon means special subject but it needs some informaton. kougi or Jugyou are suitable. They means lecture or class.

    atode means later. sonoatode means after that.

    Good story. Keep it up!

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  • Tomo
    Mochapoints: 336  |  Teacher Score: 234 (100%)

    Kono mokuyoubi wa Roma no daigaku ni ikimasu. Watashi no senmon aimasu. Kinyoubi wa watashi no tomodachi wa aimasu. Watashitachi wa Piazza di Spagna ni ikimasu!Ato de watashi no uchi ni kaerimasu.

    aimasu!?!?!?!?

    di!?!?!?!?!?

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  • lovebtsj@yahoo....
    Mochapoints: 471  |  Teacher Score: 366 (100%)
    KonoKonsyuu no mokuyoubi wa Roma ni aru daigatsuKu ni ikimasu. Watashi no senmon no Kougi ga aimasu. Kinyoubi wa watashi no tomodachi wato aimasu. Watashitachi wa Piazza di Spagna ni ikimasu!AtoSoshite  dewa watashi no uchi ni kaerimasu.
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