Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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この女のひとは可愛くて優しいです。そしてこの男の人は荒くて気持ち悪いです。あの男の子は勉強が熱心でスポーツもできる。それからあの女の子は小さくてちょっと馬鹿です。
あなたはよく知らない。僕はもういいです。
あなたはよく知らない。僕はもういいです。
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It's perfect except that 男の子は勉強が熱心で.
Why don't you use "、" ?
For example, この女の人は、可愛くて優しいです。そして、この男の人は、荒くて気持ち悪いです。
After the subject of the sentence, (in Japanese after "someoneは") you can use it.
And most young Japanese use きもい instead of 気持ち悪い.
thanks for the comment,
i just thought I do it in a polite style, but anyway I'm glad for the suppport!