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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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女の子は箱の中にいます。医者たちはテブルのところにいます。花は花瓶の中のテブルの上にあります。私たちは日本語の教室の中にいます。
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  • 祇園精舎の鐘:mikko
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    女の子は箱の中にいます。医者たちはテ-ブルのところにいます。花は花瓶の中のテ-ブルの上にあります。私たちは日本語の教室の中にいます。

    Wonderful !!

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  • Yakiniku
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  • little M
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    not テブル but テーブル

     

    and 花はテーブルの上花瓶の中あります is better.

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  • ks3186
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    no mistake but table

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  • Nara
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    Hi, Al,

    As everybody has already pointed out, テブル should have been テーブル, which is like a typo - no biggie!

    Well, for your third sentence, I would agree with little M san, or you could also say:

    花は花瓶の中にあり、花瓶はテーブルの上にあります。

    Otherwise, you did an excellent job again!

    Nara

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