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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 5

What are you wearing?

Instructions: Describe what you are wearing.

Lupodellasteppa's submission: Average Rating:
今私は白いセーター、青いジーンズ、黒いジャケット、と黒い靴をきています。
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  • Cristal
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    とても良い! 今日、私は白いシャツ、ジーンズ、黒いジャケットと黒い靴をきています。
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  • luciajp
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    黒い靴を はいています。 靴は着るではなくて、履くといいます。 頑張って!
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  • Asuko
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    Bravo! 靴をはいています。 がんばって! anche si puo dire cosi 私は白いセーター、青いジーンズ、黒いジャケット、そして黒い靴をはいています。 in bocca al lupo;)
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  • son-gokuu
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    Bravissimo!!

    カタカナも上手です。

    I agree with luciajp san.

     

    Reflexive verb :

    「靴を」履く >HA ku.  「洋服を」着る>KI ru.

    「帽子を」被る>KABU ru.

     

    今私は白いセーター、青いジーンズに黒いジャケットを着て、黒い靴を履いています。

    がんばって下さい。

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  • Kim Takagi
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    I agree with Son-gokuu-san

     

    Very good job and practice yours !

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  • Yumi
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    molto bene ;)  Io avrei detto così ;

    今、私は青いジーンズに白いセーターと黒いジャケットを着て、黒い靴をはいています。

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