Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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kono hito wa kanemochi arimasen. binbou imasu.
kono otoko no ko wa hikui ja arimasen. takai desu.
kanojo onna wa futotte arimasen. yasete imasen.
kanojo onna no ko wa toshi wo totte imasu. wakai desu.
kono otoko no ko wa hikui ja arimasen. takai desu.
kanojo onna wa futotte arimasen. yasete imasen.
kanojo onna no ko wa toshi wo totte imasu. wakai desu.
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kono hito wa kanemochi deha arimasen. binbou imasu desu.kono otoko no ko wa hikui ja arimasen hikukunai desu. takai desu. kanojo onna wa futotte arimasen imasen. yasete imasen. kanojo onna no ko wa toshi wo totte imasu. wakai desu
"She" is "kanojo",isn't "kanojo onna".
"Girl" is "onna no ko".
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Hi! Nice work - please see the corrections below:
kono hito wa kanemochi dewa/ja arimasen. binbou desu. imasu.
kono otoko no ko wa se ga hikuku ja wa arimasen. takai desu.
kanojo onna (redundant) wa futotte imasen arimasen. yasete imasensu. ("yasete imasu" is grammatically correct, but shouldn't it be the opposite of "not fat"?)
kanojo onna no ko (redundant) wa toshi wo totte imasu. wakaku wa desu arimasen.(same as above... I changed it to be negative)
Gambatte-ne!
P.S. I'm sorry I coudn't talk to you the other day -